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Two Views on Pot

October 6, 2014 at 9:41 am

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The lead editorial in today's New York Times calls for passage of marijuana legalization measures in Alaska, Oregon, and the District of Columbia, describing the drug as "far less dangerous than alcohol" and denouncing "harsh criminal penalties."

Meanwhile, over in reality — I mean, the sports section — a "news analysis" of swimmer Michael Phelps entering a six-week inpatient alcohol rehabilitation program after being arrested and charged with driving under the influence reports:

So much of Phelps's bad behavior over the years has been enabled by people invested in him carrying his sport on his broad shoulders. Would he be guilty of continuing lapses in judgment if USA Swimming had suspended Phelps for more than three months in 2009, after the marijuana pipe photograph surfaced, and he had been forced to sit out the World Championships in Rome that year?

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Ebola Victim Profile

October 6, 2014 at 9:34 am

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The lead news article in today's Times is a profile of the Dallas Ebola victim. It carries the byline of two-time Pulitzer-prize winner Kevin Sack, and it also carries some pretty compelling and fascinating reporting. Alas, it also carries a real clunker of a sentence that some editor should have caught and fixed: "Tragedy befell Ms. Troh in February when a daughter in Liberia died during childbirth."

Yikes. Can't Times readers be counted on to react with the appropriate emotion to the news of a death during childbirth without being clobbered over the head with notification that it is a "tragedy"? And who communicates in this passive-voice, non-idiomatic language — "Tragedy befell" — other than journalists?


Leaderless Protest With a Leader

October 1, 2014 at 8:21 pm

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"Hong Kong Protests Are Leaderless But Orderly" — Headline, page one, New York Times, October 1, 2014

"Joshua Wong Emerges as Unlikely Teenage Leader in Hong Kong Protests" — Headline, New York Times website, October 1, 2014

It's hard to see how both of these headlines can be accurate. The second story doesn't claim that Mr. Wong became the leader of the protests in the past 12 hours. How can the protests simultaneously have been leaderless and led by Joshua Wong? Both articles carry the byline of Times reporter Chris Buckley.


Fashion Critic Opposes Hong Kong Democracy

September 30, 2014 at 9:04 am

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A fashion review in the Times begins as follows:

PARIS — Ever since Prime Minister Haider al-Abadi of Iraq let slip during his United Nations visit last week that his government had uncovered information about an ISIS plan to attack the subways in New York and Paris, there has been a niggling sense of unease hanging over the final fashion city of the season.

"You aren't too worried about taking the Métro?" said one showgoer to another when the subject of how to get to Givenchy came up on Sunday. (Though Mayor Bill de Blasio of New York had come forward to reassure his city, in Paris, Mayor Anne Hidalgo had done no such thing.)

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Vets Worry Over Fleas

September 30, 2014 at 8:56 am

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"Vets Face Rising Worry Over Fleas" is the headline over a Times article on the front of the Science section. This struck me as a less-than-good headline for several reasons. First, I thought it was about military veterans. Then, once I realized that the headline was about veterinarians, it once again seemed inapt, because the ones worried about fleas are the pets and the pet-owners, not the veterinarians. Maybe the veterinarians are the ones "facing" the rising worry of the pet-owners, but the veterinarians interviewed in the Times article all seemed pretty calm.


Israel, Banks, Intern

September 29, 2014 at 3:12 pm

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Some recent Times-related writing of note from other publications:

In Ha'aretz, Noah Efron has a strong rebuttal to a ridiculous New York Times op-ed that ran under the headline "How Israel Silences Dissent."

In Salon, Daisy Hernandez has a first-person account of her experiences as an intern at the New York Times editorial page and on its metropolitan desk.

At Medium, Felix Salmon has a piece headlined "Annals of NYT Innumeracy, Bank Rossiya Edition."


David Brooks and the American Revolution

September 23, 2014 at 2:20 pm

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David Brooks has been writing some fine columns lately, but today he writes about something that I know quite a bit about — the American Revolution — and he stumbles. He writes:

This leadership crisis is eminently solvable. First, we need to get over the childish notion that we don't need a responsible leadership class, that power can be wielded directly by the people. America was governed best when it was governed by a porous, self-conscious and responsible elite — during the American revolution, for example, or during and after World War II. Karl Marx and Ted Cruz may believe that power can be wielded directly by the masses, but this has almost never happened historically.

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Baquet's Kidney

September 22, 2014 at 12:40 pm

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When the New York Times reported on the cancer surgery of its executive editor, Dean Baquet, the newspaper told readers that Mr. Baquet "had a malignant tumor removed from his kidney." It quoted Mr. Baquet describing the procedure as "minimally invasive."

Now Women's Wear Daily, in a feature article about Mr. Baquet, reports that the surgical procedure, at Lenox Hill Hospital (a detail the Times omitted) was to "remove the kidney altogether."

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Loeb Classical Library

September 19, 2014 at 9:50 am

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The Times reports that Harvard University Press's Loeb Classical Library is going digital "on a fee basis."

What's the fee? The Times article doesn't say, though the HUP web site says pricing is "tiered by size of institution," and that the set is available to individuals for a fee of $195 for the first year and $65 "for subsequent consecutive years."

While the Times doesn't report the pricing, it does devote two sentences to the news that:

The 1914 edition of Suetonius's Lives of the Caesars, for example, declined to translate some of the bawdier passages, instead presenting the Latin text on both pages, in deference to the anti-obscenity laws of the time. Harvard University Press confirmed that the digital edition, like the current print edition, includes full translations of the dirty bits.

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Home Depot Data Breach

September 17, 2014 at 10:25 am

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Joe Nocera has a column about the Home Depot customer data breach that is worth noticing for at least two reasons.

First, he engages in what Times public editor Margaret Sullivan has called, in other instances, "anonymous outsourcing," borrowing another news organization's anonymously sourced material and passing it along to Times readers without independently assessing the veracity of the sources. Mr. Nocera writes:

Bloomberg Businessweek found two unnamed former Home Depot managers who claimed that they were told to "settle for 'C-level security' because ambitious upgrades would be costly and might disrupt the operation of critical business systems."

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Copying the Guardian's Error, Without Credit

September 16, 2014 at 9:50 am

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Reader-contributor-watchdog-content co-creator-participant-community member Arul Louis writes:

A New York Times Op-Talk published Sept. 14 claims to quote remarks "last week" by Indian Prime Minister Narendra Modi to a correspondent for the Indian newspaper, The Hindu," and the NYT uses it to criticize him over climate change.

However, the link from the NYT Op-Talk by Jack Flanagin to The Hindu article is in fact a report on Modi's meeting with Japanese students on Sept. 2 during a visit to Japan.

The Guardian made the same error calling it an "interview with The Hindu a few days earlier." Elsewhere in the Op-Talk Flanagin quotes The Guardian article, but not for this erroneous claim about Modi talking to The Hindu reporter.

Moreover, the full quote from The Hindu story hardly makes Modi an environmentl skeptic; in fact he mentioned Al Gore's book, "An Inconvenient Truth" and speaks out against "exploiting nature." Here are the relevant portions of Amit Barua's story in The Hindu (to which the NYT article linked):

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Domestic Violence Deacon

September 16, 2014 at 9:34 am

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A sports column by Richard Sandomir carries the following passage:

Last Thursday, when James Brown delivered an eloquent call to action on domestic violence before the debut of CBS's "Thursday Night Football," he was using his personal link to the issue. Through the Verizon Foundation, he has worked on domestic violence, sitting in on a crisis hotline in Austin, Tex.; talking to high school and college football coaches to help change their — and their players' — attitudes toward women; and interviewing domestic violence victims for public service announcements.

"I sat there in Austin, next to the counselors, listening to the calls," he said in a telephone interview on Monday. "It touched my heart, and it was so painful to listening to the panic in these ladies' voices that I had to take the headset off, go to a window, turn my back and shed tears."

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Thanks for Clarifying

September 15, 2014 at 9:49 am

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An article in Sunday's Times explains helpfully, "Not all fashion designers are gay; however, a large proportion are, and a fair number of their customers are, too."

News you can use.


Gaza Tower

September 15, 2014 at 9:31 am

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A dispatch from Gaza City about an apartment building destroyed in this summer's war could have used a more careful edit.

The article reports: "Atef Adwan, one of 28 Hamas lawmakers elected in 2006, bought a first-floor apartment five years ago for his second wife, and spent much of the summer there with her and their two young sons, fearing the Israelis would target his home in the border town of Beit Hanoun."

The phrase "his second wife" raises more questions than it answers. Does Mr. Adwan have two wives at the same time? Or is the apartment for his sole current wife, in which case, why does the Times feel the need to mention that he had a prior marriage?

Then there is a reference to "Owda J. Abu Mathkour, the wealthy mogul who runs the Zafer contracting company." Isn't "wealthy mogul" redundant? Call the squad squad, as William Safire used to say.

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September 9, 2014 at 10:14 am

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A Times review of a movie, "The Green Prince," about a friendship between a Mossad officer and the son of a Hamas leader, reports, "It was released in Israel this spring, as the latest American effort to put together a regional peace plan was falling apart, and is coming out here after a summer-long conflict between Israel and Hamas in Gaza that left more than 2,000 dead and thousands more wounded or homeless."

Describing the summer-long conflict as "between Israel and Hamas in Gaza" inaccurately suggests that the conflict was confined to Gaza. In fact, it also affected parts of Israel, as reporting elsewhere in the Times has made clear. An editor should have deleted the words "in Gaza."


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